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Dealing with scale confusion. Needs a lot of work still, as it was done in a rush.

Oil on illustration board. Completed in 12 hours, on October 17, 2006.

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:iconsepple:
Very nice, but i think it is a bit to blury.
:icongardon:
It's an original idea!! But I agree it's blur overrides the quality of it.. And maybe a bg would make it richer... :heart: all your pieces are nice!!

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:iconoverachiever22:
thank you. yeah a part of that is the camera, but mostly it was the general effect I was going for. I definitely see where you're coming from on that though.

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:iconoverachiever22:
I agree. it was a last minute project.. I really had no choice :(

thank you! :hug:

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:iconboth:
Hilights and smoke are amazing. You rendered her skin beautifully. As always, far beyond what I could ever hope to do.

The bit of shading around her right elbow makes it seem a bit longer and sharper than maybe it should be. Then again, I don't look at elbows much. Entire left arm seems really small. Pose also feels unnatural: if her right shoulder is raised higher than the left and her forearm is about flat across her stomach, wouldn't the elbow of her lowered left arm come down a bit farther than her hand? Maybe the position is possible, but I doubt it's what I'd choose for reclining comfortably on a pear.

Glad to see new work. I doubt you need yet another person telling you, but keep it up.
:iconoverachiever22:
thank you for the comment!

yes, the project was sort of a last minute thing.. night before it was due. I agree there are many aspects of her body that aren't properly rendered. hehe and I doubt it's how I'd recline on a pear, too.

:D

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:iconfanofchocolate:
wow! nice use of colors! and i like this blur effect!!!!!!!!!!!!

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